Children's Film: Reflection & Improvement

We were all generally happy with our children's film. However, there are defiantly some improvements we would like to make:

• Opening Credits: we want to improve our opening credits. we didn't spend much time on our ones in the children's film and they did not look as professional as we would like. 
• Dialog: our dialog was also unprofessional in our children's film. We will look to improve this in our thriller.
• Transitions: our transitions in our children's film were not very clean and seemed amateur. We are going to spend more time on these to make them look better. 
• Range of long/mid/close up shots: we will make sure we get a lot more shot types in our film to make it more professional. 

We were relatively happy with the music in our children's film. We will try really hard to try and make our music as good as it was in the children's film. However, we do think it will be harder to write thriller music because it much more subtle.